So, this is the first draft of linework… not satisfied with it yet, though, want to make it better. At the very least: I’m not sure his body looks like he’s quite resting on his weight; I’m not sure his head is interacting with the pillow properly; I don’t think his head looks properly otterly.

Other suggestions would be great, before I start taking shading to it.

A very rough sketch so far.  There’s so many things wrong with this I couldn’t even begin to say.  How many can you find?