Another brief revised fragment of this story, continuing from last time. Â It’s short because I spent most of the writing period trying to work out what the guy was cursing like. Â I appear to have lost my sanity because I decided a walrus was appropriate. Â How does a walrus swear? Â Um. Â He says ‘bukkit‘?
In the next stall, a raven was busy shooing children away from pyramids of melons meticulously piled, and in his frustration nearly knocked them over himself. The avian was cursing like a walrus and Kohath decided to pass him by.
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