Yeah, so I decided to continue on from my last Shine scrap and see if I could make a proper story out of it.
Jan was no longer the scrawny fox he had been when I’d first met him; a few weeks of eating with me had him up to looking healthy. It didn’t look like he’d be sporting a paunch like mine anytime soon, though.
“All right,†I said, “Let’s get out of here.â€
We went down to the street and headed to the subway station. People shaded their eyes as we went by. I ignored them; not fifteen minutes ago they’d’ve been doing the same for the sunset, and my light’d be past them just as quickly.
Jan sat across from me on the subway car. I saw my light in his eyes.
“You don’t hafta sit there, you know,†I said.
“What, and let someone else enjoy this view?â€
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